The phone rings, wakes her from a deep slumber. She reaches
across to the nightstand and checks the readout on the caller ID, what could he
possibly want at this time of the night? She considers just ignoring it,
pretending not to have heard but she cannot lie to herself even if she could to
him. She rises from the bed at the same time as she answers the phone, with
just a hint of sleep mixed into the concern in her voice as she asks him what the
matter is. ‘Nothing’ apparently is the matter, he just wants to talk and she
was the first person he could think of. She smiles and tells him she’s all ears
and wanders across to the window and throws it wide open. As the cool night
breeze blows in, the voice at the other end of the line begins to tell her of his
day and because he is a born storyteller, it immediately becomes exciting and comes
alive in front of her eyes as he describes the things that have happened. He
finishes and asks about her day, she takes a minute to collect her thoughts and
hesitantly proceeds to tell him the bare bones of incidents. He interrupts her with
questions about everything until she has made a story of it too, something she
finds she is unable to do usually. They both laugh about it; the hour has been well
spent. Goodbyes are exchanged and there is a gentle click as he disconnects the
phone. She continues to stand still for a few more moments before stepping back
from the window, shutting the panes and falling back into bed, falling asleep
once again, this time with a smile on her face.
I think this is one of your best posts. Really.
ReplyDeleteThat means a lot coming from you :)
DeleteRohini Dasgupta. Maybe I should just keep giving you a new writing challenge every other day. :) . What i love about this one is the insight. Deep down inside, every one of us has been either of the two characters portrayed here. So I'll be surprised if anyone reading this cant see themselves in it.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
Thanks Cyclo! I just didn't stop to think when I wrote this one and was pleasantly surprised by the outcome myself :)
DeleteSublime in its simplicity. Seriously, a succulent story, superlative in its style, superbly summarizing such a satisfying sight.
ReplyDeleteOK first of all WOW! Those are a lot of big words in 2 sentences
DeleteSecondly, thanks a ton. I really enjoyed writing it :)
Sublime in its simplicity. Seriously, a succulent story, superlative in its style, superbly summarizing such a satisfying sight.
ReplyDeleteWow. This one really is amazing Ro!! :)
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